Coins on the Tongue
Not bad, right styling.. the styling should be more like an epic poem,
song more lyrical.. And it should be in the twisted wonderland,
not having the repeated characters as much in focus,
some sides about Red Riding Hood as an elder choosing the Godmother’s world,
and other characters in the world.. And other souls
that face the trials of the in between twisted Wnderland/Oz world with varying outcomes.. like some badder guys buying into Crooked’s guilt trip, and
surrending to the darkness, some stuck in the in between,
Red’s Cloak being left behind when she moved on,
etc.. Let’s me grab some MAAH lore for you.